by MemoirsOfMe Jun 15, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Her gentle movements, |
by Kaila
Nice job this is also one of your better poems i think great work i enjoyed readin your poems |
by Kaylee
Some of the lines are a bit repetitive but the imagery is beauitful in a way. The message does get across. YOur rhyming parts didn't seem forcedand your descriptions were pretty decent. |
by Raychil
Bah! not place? they wouldn't know a good poem if it bit them in the butt! haha. Seriously, I liked it a lot. I thought it was a beautiful poem and excellently written. Wonderful job. |