Perfect

by JAMIE   Jun 15, 2006


We were so perfect for each other
Why did you have to go so fast?
That one day when you left me
My world came to a screeching halt

When my friends asked what was wrong
I just said HE broke up with me
They all wondered, "Why?!" "How?!"
They all asked, "What happened?!"
They all said, "You two were so, so perfect."
Then all I said was,
"He thought I would commit suicide,
If we dated for a long time and broke up"

They were all as shocked as I was
How could I see it coming?
How could anyone?
You never told me about your concerns

I thought everything was perfect
I guess I thought wrong

But at least I now know
I am not the only one who thought
We were so *perfect* for each other

I just wish you felt the same...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I like this poem, the first stanza is really good, and the whole poem is clear.

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I liked this one. Cause as I read it, It felt like you were just talking to me telling me your feelings. Really great job!! Your emotions were really clear and truthful! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    At the end, it was kinda sad! are you sure he doesn't feel the same way? you never know! great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by David Moss

    Your work is good - and honestly I enjoyed your quotes better...where your efforts to communicate with just a few lines is more detailed and with great imagery.

    Cheers, and good writing - DM

  • 18 years ago

    by JarOme

    Have you ever write what happened in your own life?...it comes so bad but makes do good things! This one is good has some feelings on it.

    Comment me/Rate me
    Charlie

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