I really like this one. :)

Have you ever write what happened in your own life?...it comes so bad but makes do good things! This one is good has some feelings on it.

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Charlie

Your work is good - and honestly I enjoyed your quotes better...where your efforts to communicate with just a few lines is more detailed and with great imagery.

Cheers, and good writing - DM

At the end, it was kinda sad! are you sure he doesn't feel the same way? you never know! great job! 5/5

I liked this one. Cause as I read it, It felt like you were just talking to me telling me your feelings. Really great job!! Your emotions were really clear and truthful! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I like this poem, the first stanza is really good, and the whole poem is clear.

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Gaby