It's good but I'm not sure I like how complete sentences and thoughts are broken up into smaller lines for seemingly no reason at all. You can have longer lines, you know. The last stanza for instance could say:

So would you ask?
Or would you
not want to go with me?

Stuff like that. Anyway it's a very heartfelt poem and I like it.

Very nicely written! great job!!!!!! well, 5/5!

Note: "of course" instead of "of coarse" ;)

Great job. you know, I love to read love poems! MOST are always so good and emotional! you really know how to write some good ones! 5/5

Again, I liked this. I even actually liked how you did the 'sigh' thing. It was different but i liked it! You also got straight to the point which was also great. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.