That was really good! a bit angry but very deep... i like the way u rhyme!
well done :)
love
soph

Great poem so much emotion anger and pain much luv lynne

Wow thats really intense and sad...great way to express yourself tho...5/5

I loved the flow of this poem and it was very emotional. i absolutely loved it. GREAT job. 5/5.

Amazing writing...you really got to me with this one...

Wow that was awesome,, i hate when people say something i write is intense so i wont say it was cuz i dont think it was, but thats some awesome stuff keep doing what your doing :)

Wow that was great! It was very emotional that's what made it great!