Nice poem

Guys just like to say i'm sorry if the poem isn't that good. I'm not exactly experienced. Only started this year. So ya! Just by the way I'm Tammy. I'm 15 from South Africa. So thank you for rating it if you do. And i would love comments. I need to learn where I can improve. Thanks everyone.

Tammy

Ok, well this is more of a story than a poem. The structure is not all there, and the flow needs some work. Short and needs to be a bit longer I think, although there are many poems that are short and still good. Keep up the hard work and don't give up.

Peace, Joe