by Sean Allen Jun 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
first love
If only I could return |
by Vanessa Lea
This is a wonderful, touching poem. It deserves a much higher rating though. |
Awesome poem!! it was really really good. great job, keep it up |
I liked ur first verse it was greeeeat keep it up never stop |
by Johanna
I see you've heard this a thousand times, but this poem really was absolutely breath taking. I loved each line. You flowed beautifully. You're an amazingpoet. I'll be looking forward to more of your poetry. |
by lexie
Beautiful.it reminds me of summers i had growing up.-lexie |