WOW! i adored that! woowww.. i think that has become my favourite poem! that was just so beautiful, the words you chose were stunning and you had me glued to the poem until the very end.. wow.. i also felt that this had a slightly deeper message than you portrayed.. truly excellent write! 10/5!

Filled with emotion and absolutley amazing!! jaw dropping lines, and amazing creative technique. just wanted to say congradulations, one of the best i've read in a while!!! 5/5

Such a sweet poem... nice sweet loving picture you painted in your reader's mind... good write. 5/5

Beautiful.it reminds me of summers i had growing up.-lexie

I see you've heard this a thousand times, but this poem really was absolutely breath taking. I loved each line. You flowed beautifully. You're an amazingpoet. I'll be looking forward to more of your poetry.
Johanna

I liked ur first verse it was greeeeat keep it up never stop
Peace and im out~~

Awesome poem!! it was really really good. great job, keep it up

This is a wonderful, touching poem. It deserves a much higher rating though.