Faith (A Sedoka)

Its odd but it seems to me like something that would be said in a movie trailer for a cool film. Love the words like "vast" and "foreboding" and "majestic" in it because they help make it bold.

Nicely done. Nice choice of words... haven't done a Sedoka myself before, but I like it... short yet deep and open for interpretation. Good write. 5/5

Pretty good! it lacked a little bit of emotion but it still kept me at a 5. creative and that was awesome!!

Wow.. very good! those lines were so powerful and strong! all the syllable counts worked well, and the beautiful words you used made it even better! great write! 5/5

A very nice write, although i don't really understand poems like that normally this one showed emotion and i like it heaps. Keep writing.

Pip xxx