by 111308 Jun 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
A smile, |
by makayla
Good job, love this one |
by Baby Rainbow
Excellent opening, you have captured the art of how to draw the reader into the poem. well done this is a good talent. great poem with lots of emotion in it and its very strong, i hope your ok. xxxxxxxx |
by makayla
Omfg i lovethis madd cute i can deff relate:) |
Exellent poem! *hugs* I hope that you you will feel better soon. I really like how you express a lot of feeling, so much emotion without overdoing the ryhmes. |
Very deep. I love this poem. It's reminds me of...me. And issues that I have sometimes. Great job =) xoxo |