by Kristina Jun 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
I'm staying strong, |
by David Moss
A simple message, but said very well. |
by Sean Allen
I liked the (maybe) unintentional rhyme in the last stanza; I think it helped the poem end. I felt like you could have worked in more specific details, and more poetic language, but the poem was very straightforward, and that can be a good quality too. |