"Caused from believeing this was a game."
i'd replace 'from' with 'by' and believing is spelled like that, without the third 'e'.
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Why is this poem in the slang section, doesn't seem like it's the right place?

Anyhow, I thought the rhyme scheme was pretty good, though some lines were much longer than the others, which leads me to believe that you were trying to fit the words is necessary to make a rhyme work or to get a point across.

I liked the message of the poem for the most part. I do think that consideration of the consequences of sex is very important, as is protection and honesty about sexual pasts. I'm not sure that I agree that all people with Y chromosomes are irresponsible, but I can get the point.

Hmm, A very different topic which made it very interesting to read. In a few places you got a little wordy on the last sentance of every paragraph trying to rhyme. I sugest you try combining words together to make the sllyable count more flowy! Even in poems that don't requir sllyable counts you still need to make sure that the slyables in every line are about the same as the above paragraph or it will throw the poem off! I loved how you kept an open mind with such a difficult subject and I very much enjoyed it. 5/5

It makes sense and it is a very good poem. It does not descriminate but advises. Quality work.