Very powerfully done.i love that in poems.i have written a few like this myself.being a "freak" or an outcast is a terrible feeling.but it makes great poetry.-lexie

Great deep and dark poem that shows your anger well, a great poem well done

This is such a great peom keep up the good work

kazza

Very good poem. Though, I do maybe think it should be put into the explict section, Only cause you have a few words stared out..

I thought the message in this was good and very clear. Overall, I think you've done a pretty good job. Keep it up! 5/5 && Thank you for your comment. =)

`Taleee. xx.

Wow.. this was a very powerful write! great job! the emotion was clear, it flowed well, and you used pretty good descriptions.. 4/5

Actually, make that a 5/5! :)

Short simple and well written really love this one. Keep up the good work and thanks for your comment on my own poem...much apreciation. 5* for you

Interesting, very different. I really liked it.

joy*:.xx

Great poem! u really let ur feelings out on this one! keep up the good work!! 5/5 hehe thanx for commenting on my poems!!