by Kaylee Jun 15, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Verse One |
by Matt
Amazing! thats all i can say...amazaing |
Very different. |
by Sean Allen
I'd want to hear the music on this one, because though it reads fine as a poem, I'm having trouble finding my rhythm on my own. I liked the title, and the line in the poem. I thought that the story was interesting and that it's all well done, though I expected it to rhyme for some reason. Good work. |
by Darien
Haha, I love the title. I would really like to hear this piece sung. I'm thinking about writing some music to lyrics I have. I'll post those lyrics once I get a nice acoustic guitar to record with. |
I imagine it would sound good with the righy mustc I love the lyrics |