Kaylee, This was GREAT. I loved it. Like I've said in some of your other songs, I'm not that much into country music, But these lyrics are great. And, I would listen to the song. I really liked the chorus. I thought you've written this really well. Great job on it hun. Keep it up =D 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This lyrics are great i wish i cud write like that. i loved it.
5/5

I imagine it would sound good with the righy mustc I love the lyrics

Haha, I love the title. I would really like to hear this piece sung. I'm thinking about writing some music to lyrics I have. I'll post those lyrics once I get a nice acoustic guitar to record with.

I'd want to hear the music on this one, because though it reads fine as a poem, I'm having trouble finding my rhythm on my own. I liked the title, and the line in the poem. I thought that the story was interesting and that it's all well done, though I expected it to rhyme for some reason. Good work.

Very different.
Im glad its original apposed to the regualr poetry.
thanks
5/5
~Emah

Amazing! thats all i can say...amazaing