Meet your Fate

by SilenceBreaksTheHeart   Jun 15, 2006


God, I feel like dying,
for now I'll settle for crying.
Keep laughing, one day you'll be frying.
You think that I am lying?

You keep trying to bring me down,
make me frown.
I'll take your ass to the ground,
won't make a sound.

You think that you know me
but how could that be?
You ignored my every plea,
you never tried to see.

Now it's too late.
Gonna start with a clean slate.
No more time to debate
your about to meet your fate.

The style of this poem is a little different than the rest of my poems...comment please and tell me what you think.

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  • 18 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    This is a good poem i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    He he he thankz. but i still think ur better. yea we do kinda have different styles. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    All of ur poems are great! great vocabs and rhymes and style. almost always different style. awesome work.

  • 18 years ago

    by s.u.r.r.e.n.d.e.r

    That was a very talented poem and it was amazing and i enjoyed reading it... it really made me think and open my mind too ... keep it up =)

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow i rele like htis poem. its rele good. it has great flow and great rhythm.. its amazing.. ur a very talented writer.. keep it up.. i like ur poems.. 5/5
    take care
    angie

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