Wow i rele like htis poem. its rele good. it has great flow and great rhythm.. its amazing.. ur a very talented writer.. keep it up.. i like ur poems.. 5/5
take care
angie

That was a very talented poem and it was amazing and i enjoyed reading it... it really made me think and open my mind too ... keep it up =)

All of ur poems are great! great vocabs and rhymes and style. almost always different style. awesome work.

He he he thankz. but i still think ur better. yea we do kinda have different styles. :)

This is a good poem i like it