Yet another wonderfully written piece, i run with the struggle of the dead also and those moments when they are in your head. and all you want is that moment to talk back and it drives you to the point you think the only way out is to join them so i loved this.

i thank you again for all the comments, they meant alot to me because you found what it was i try to express in writting. i write with no rules what so ever the only rule ever was use words and paint your picture with them, i find that structure and rhyme scheme take away from the raw emotion of writting, and if done right the raw emotion is the patteren. i will return the favor though and comment on all of yours, plus i enjoy them so much. question though is it something against explicit poems or did you just not like any of them cause every other poem i had got comments except thoughs, haha just wondering. you hit the nail on the head when you called me an observer i just want to understand reasoning behind everything, but behind the scenes. well take care of yourself. you ever need anything or just want to hit up a writting conversation just throw me a way to get ahold of you.