I already said it, but it's a pleasure to say it again, your poem is absolutly magnificent, it makes you visualise every feeling, every moment as if it was happening right in front of you, it's a wondrous thing ;)
I really love your poem, i think you have a huge potential and hope to see more of your writing in the future ;)

Wow. that poem was so well written. thanx for the comment and i hope you continue to read my poems. i reall enjoyed this one though and i hope to read more in the near future!
Toni Marie