Saving Me

by The Undoing   Jun 15, 2006


When the only thing I know is sadness and anger,
You are my life saving boat, to show me the truth.
Your words are undying, and never untrue,
And when this is all over I hope I only have you.
Like a sock for a foot, you comfort me and keep me,
Warm like the sun, your hearts glow is free.
If I were to go, it would be because you had,
And if I stay, its because you are here.
Youve fvieled my heart, to an unmarkable place,
Ill wait forever, standing in this place.
If only you saw me, the way I see you,
My life would be filled, and my life made anew.
I love you dearly, and that is ever so true
It will never change, no matter what you do.
If love you choose, not to be mine,
Then my life I would change, to your eyes be fine.
For any sacrifice, wouldnwouldcome with hesitation,
Its my heart not my head, when you make indication.
So dearest I wrote this because you mean to me
The world and more for yours to be.
Forever I will feel this, and always be true,
My words are spoken, from my heart to you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Thanks Guys appreciate it all!

  • 18 years ago

    by katie

    Hey man great poem that rocked keep writting :) ~kate~

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    It was so sweeeeet! I loved it! And about the problem with abbreviations ive managed to take it out editing it, erasing the poem and copying it again. With a couple of times it goes! Anyway, keep writing!
    xx

    ...TILLmyLASTtearFALLS...

  • 18 years ago

    by The Undoing

    Thanks :)
    I dont like how i have so many views and no votes though
    Thanks for the comment :)

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl this was great beautifully written. very t0uching write. great j0b with meaning. thank u f0r ur c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t =] xx
    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra