"so her sadness remains a secrete"
secret doesn't have an 'e' on the end
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It is really sad to see people do that to themselves, but hopefully things can start to get better after more people start talking about how unreasonable that 'image of perfection' really is.

This is a sad story, and so true as well. It is a shame that the world we live in can't see past a "perfect" image.

P.S. Make sure to get rid of that 'e' on "secret."

Weak