Wow. thats all i can say. on of ur best poems yet. the stanzas are long and just long enough for great emotion but not so long as to bore the reader. u are showing ur tlent now. omg i love it! good luck!
love ya lots,
sore

Omfg tripp!!! u kno u can always talk to me, and if u dont ill stab u in the face with a saughtering iron!!! i love this entire poem, but right now imm focusing on u and how u r. u know u can always talk to me, so plz do.