by Joy Jun 16, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I can feel it, |
Oops! lol didn't mean to double post! Sorry! |
Aww it didn't suck! I liked it! The flow was pretty good, so was the rhyming. The emotion was strong in this one. Keep writting you have talent! |
Aww it didn't suck! I liked it! The flow was pretty good, so was the rhyming. The emotion was strong in this one. Keep writting you have talent! |
I lked it THANKS |
Very good i love your words, you are a great poet and you should be proud : ) |