So Close, Yet So Far

by Joy   Jun 16, 2006


I can feel it,
I see it in your eye,
You want it too,
But you're letting it pass by.

Your hand moves slightly,
And I hope for the best,
It's moving closer to me,
But you just lay it on the arm rest.

Why can't you admit it,
I know you want it too,
You're so close, yet so far,
I hate this hell you put me through.

All I can do is pray,
And hope with all my heart,
That you love me back,
So we could have a start.

My heart jumps again,
Your hand is right there,
I'm about to take a big risk,
And go through with this dare.

**Blah this sucks but I dunno you kind of have that sense of "foreboding" at the end...only in a good way...not impending evil. Makes you wonder if she grabs his hand or if she chickens out last second??**

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  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Oops! lol didn't mean to double post! Sorry!

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww it didn't suck! I liked it! The flow was pretty good, so was the rhyming. The emotion was strong in this one. Keep writting you have talent!

    Cayce x

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww it didn't suck! I liked it! The flow was pretty good, so was the rhyming. The emotion was strong in this one. Keep writting you have talent!

    Cayce x

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I lked it THANKS

  • 18 years ago

    by White Blizzard

    Very good i love your words, you are a great poet and you should be proud : )
    If you get time read and comment acouple of mine, take care.
    Cheers

    ~**White Blizzard**~