Neglected

by Rican Chemistry   Jun 16, 2006


The days keep passing by
And you're still making me feel alone
Even though I have you close
I cant believe how far we've grown

The calls are not the same
You don't say sweet things to my ear
You don't hold me close to you
You don't wipe away my tears

I ask you to please love me
To show me that you care
But it seems the more I ask
The more your not there

I wait around for your touch
Yet it could be days before one kiss
I cant help but feel neglected
Because its your attention that I miss

Today we fought so hard
I almost gave up on what we have
Because I feel I'm losing you
And things are going bad

How can I show you
All the tears I've cried
How can I forget the pain
And all the times you've lied

I feel like you don't care
Like you no longer love me
Thats why I feel neglected
Because you no longer notice me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    I ask you to please love me
    To show me that you care
    But it seems the more I ask
    The more your not there
    ----
    I loved this stanza the most
    very great piece of work!
    I know these damn lovers fights hurt the most =(
    I hope you're Okay
    Wonderful poem =)
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    I really like the Pain/Passion in this poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey i can s0rta relate t0 a few 0f the lines in this piece. it was very t0uching and sad. it was very well written th0ugh. meaningful and heartfelt.
    um ab0ut my p0em.. it was 0ne 0f my friends. i dun0 if u read my p0ems 0n my 0ld acc0unt 0n this site, i wr0te ab0ut 100 0n him c0z i l0ved him wen he was living in my area. then he m0ved up t0 mildura n i s0rta g0t 0ver him. n yer then the hit and run. at the time he was here u c0uld say he was the l0ve 0f my life. but yer nah im still with harry [my b0yfriend] anyway s0rry t0 blab 0n. keep up the g0od w0rk xx
    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Ohhh this poem was absolutly great. I so LOVED it. This is exactly how I am feeling at this time. And it is so hard to cope with. Hope you are ok. Great poem. 5/5. Keep it up;)

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