Ohhh this poem was absolutly great. I so LOVED it. This is exactly how I am feeling at this time. And it is so hard to cope with. Hope you are ok. Great poem. 5/5. Keep it up;)

Hey i can s0rta relate t0 a few 0f the lines in this piece. it was very t0uching and sad. it was very well written th0ugh. meaningful and heartfelt.
um ab0ut my p0em.. it was 0ne 0f my friends. i dun0 if u read my p0ems 0n my 0ld acc0unt 0n this site, i wr0te ab0ut 100 0n him c0z i l0ved him wen he was living in my area. then he m0ved up t0 mildura n i s0rta g0t 0ver him. n yer then the hit and run. at the time he was here u c0uld say he was the l0ve 0f my life. but yer nah im still with harry [my b0yfriend] anyway s0rry t0 blab 0n. keep up the g0od w0rk xx
l0ve fr0m
d0ra

I really like the Pain/Passion in this poem!

I ask you to please love me
To show me that you care
But it seems the more I ask
The more your not there
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I loved this stanza the most
very great piece of work!
I know these damn lovers fights hurt the most =(
I hope you're Okay
Wonderful poem =)
NemO x0x0x0x0x