My One Sanctuary

by White Blizzard   Jun 16, 2006


(This poem is about a girl, and she knows who she is when she reads it)

I want to walk along a path with you,
Everything I see I want to show you.
I'd love to walk in beauty with the beauty,
Holding your soft hand and feeling your soft skin,
And to look into your eyes and feel the sweetness from within.

In my garden path of sanctuary I see you.
You're ever so beautiful, you're my wild untamed flower,
Every time i see your face I lose my power.
You're in my garden of sanctuary,
To me you are my sanctuary.

When I heard your voice I drifted away,
Away to my dream place hoping you'll stay.
When I saw your face for the first time I fell,
Then I knew my heart wanted to sell.

You shine so bright more than the sun,
And one day I hope I can give you all the fun,
I've said it before and I'll say it again, you are the one.

~**White Blizzard**~

~**Blizzard Inc.**~

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  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Very good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, im touched, this is a true piece of poetry written with care and devotion. it is obvious that you have written from the heart and that you have a greta talent. keep it up. soz it took so long to get back to you but i've been a little erm out of it lately. anyway thanx 4 the comment, i'd apreciate another maybe on my knewer, poems? thanx. anyway great poem which i loved. amy must be please to have a guy like you.
    i also love the rhyming triplet at the end great finish.
    anyway take care and keep it up.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Joy

    Aww I LOVE this...def. the sweetest thing I've ever read!!

    Great flow, keep it up!

    joy*:..xx

  • 18 years ago

    by saurabh_poeticheart

    Hey there thnks for checking out my poem. really feels good when sumone cares to read ur work. ur poem is too good man, really sweet, its a short poem and when i came to the end of it i was so sad that its over, it was like goin in sumother world which is beautiful as anything can be. grest work

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a passionate poem with a nice flow

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