Fall To Pieces

by Miss Pipp   Jun 16, 2006


Every time I saw you
i would fall to pieces.
to see you angry-
angry at me. I wish I hadn't done it...

I wish I hadn't done it
You say I'm smart and nice
but if I was I would have realised...

you had feelings for me still
three months later.
Nine months and
when I talk to you I still feel sad.

I wont stop until I'm back in your arms
because without you,
I fall to pieces.

~this is about my ex boyfriend who I dumped nine months ago and still have feelings for. I don't think there is a flow to it and it's hard to understand but I hope you guys like it~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I liked the repitition, it saved the poem from the lack of rhythm and rhyme. I liked the details too, they definitely made this a love poem that belongs to you, not some cliche.