Metal Stars

by Wings Of Flames   Jun 16, 2006


Stars hung in the sky,
As I stared in disbelief,
My world rushing past me,
With no signs of bitter grief,

Alone a word so cold,
Ice lies all around,
Hits and blows against me,
But me wihtout a sound,

The flowers die inside themselves,
So no one sees their pain,
No saviours left for me,
In the frozen drops of rain,

Time has melted beneath me,
Age is ripped to shreads,
Tattered skin along the stream,
Sown with needle threads,

Sorry pleas, forgiveness,
Makes no dent or change,
Metal to your heart,
Hate has formed a range.

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  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Lovely,
    you're words are so strong! i love it :)
    take care,
    sammi xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    I really like your use of words, but it seems that if you stopa nd read it, it doesn't actually make logical sense.... ah well. i still liked reading so you did it right i spsoe.
    ttyl, moo moo.
    love suz

  • 18 years ago

    by JAMIE

    Great poem!

    correction:
    but me wihtout a sound
    should be:
    but me without a sound

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Another good piece. i loved the style of writing. sometimes people try to put this off but never manage it, so well done. my favorite stanza was the third one.

    Brad

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    Deep and thoughtful! insightful.

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