Deep and thoughtful! insightful.

Another good piece. i loved the style of writing. sometimes people try to put this off but never manage it, so well done. my favorite stanza was the third one.

Brad

Great poem!

correction:
but me wihtout a sound
should be:
but me without a sound

I really like your use of words, but it seems that if you stopa nd read it, it doesn't actually make logical sense.... ah well. i still liked reading so you did it right i spsoe.
ttyl, moo moo.
love suz

Lovely,
you're words are so strong! i love it :)
take care,
sammi xx