Quite good...I loved this piece

I love your poem you are a talented writer so GO AUSSIE GO 5/5 Steve

This was a very good piece, the wording and language was very good, the imagery was well portrayed, a very good message.
Well done
love Tara-Kay
xx

Wow, I really like this poem. Great job! The ask yourself part was my favorite one. Thanks for the comment on my poem. I give you a 5/5.

~Kat~

A very meaningful piece there it really got me thinking!! x

Interesting poem, I like it, so unique and idea of it is excellent. You pointed truly powerful message with your words and repetition of some words and lines really left good impression to me. Well done!