by Natalie
Aye. Are you alright? It's a very good poem Brittnay, But are you okay? |
by Colby
Wow this poem is very deep and powerful, I loved it. 5/5 |
Don't put your work down, even if you wrote it just as a venting emotion poem, be proud of your work always. I was particularly captivated with the beginning of this poem, about eating blades to rip away what you don't want to be there. I could also relate to wanting to take someone away so I wouldn't hurt them. Even though this poem was for you, I could relate to it so much of it in my own life and that made it a great poem to me. |
by Mark
Brittnay.. please e-mail me or something.. I hate it when you're sad. I don't know what to say atm but please.. talk to someone about it. |
It was beautiful keep up the work and i hope it works out for u hon |