OH MEE GEE!!!!!!! u have this talent w/ ur words, that just blows me away!!!!!!! u have such a talent!!! 5/5!! wow...i feel ur rain just bleeding through ur words as the blood would through a vain! i feel ur pain and i am so sry! just stay strong babe!!! stay strong

jenie

Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. it tells me how you feel i like it alot.. nice job!

The imagry in this poem are great. And the poem itself is so desperate and sad. You did an amazing job.
Hey, I actually have a poem called "bleeding crimson rain". You might like it.
Anyways, great job! And keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Wow... Amazing flow of words... I rarely read love poems but this poem really captivate me... Greatly expresed emotions and nicely written description...

Great work! :)