Great 4/5

Interesting rhyme scheme you have there. I like it actually. It's a sad kind of poem, but the repetition is a good emphasis. Nice job.

There is an old saying if you love someone set them free if they come back it was meant to be if they don`t then it was`nt meant to be. Right now my heart breaks for you and I really hope it does work out for you two. I loved this poem you have really grown alot. 5/5
All the best,
Drew

Awesome, i really loved this poem, it was excellent
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Hey I love this poem. I read some of your other ones and There all great. Thanx for commenting on mine.