Febuarary

Should be..

Febuary {I think..I'm having a mind blank}

Other than that, This was a good piece, Kaylee. I really did like the last stanza. Speshly the line, "And my heart does beat?" A very nicely written poem. Keep 'em coming. =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

"My voice hollow echoes in a chamber,"
unless 'hollow-echoes' is an expression that I've never heard of, this line doesn't really make sense to me.
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I thought this was a really interesting poem, filled with all sorts of details and images that I'll admit had me lost for a few parts (I'm not someone who lies about understanding everything about a poem heh).

Wonderfully done Kaylee... Your words are deep and emotional. Powerful piece!

Beautiful poem, it hardly has any of those "fill in" words. Keep it up

Excellent poem!!
check out mine please?

You have such a unique way of writing i love it!

Great poem!
I loved it very much
keep it up

Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

Valentines Day is always a hard day for those of us who are relationshipless or who have a relationship we are trying to forget for one reason or another. It is not fun, and you captured the feeling well. It is not a good day in my book either. Keep tudging on love, it will get better.

-Tainted

Deep words...good job

I really like this poem! it is really deep and i love it!
come read some of mine! i suggest reading Saftey Pin....its a favorite of mine!!
XOXOXOXOX
Kamille

Beautiful poem. I really like the description you used, detailing every bit of this poem with some really strong adjectives. Really good stuff Kaylee!.. woo!

So sad...but still.
5/5
;(
I my not be able to do all these poems today but I shall eventually.
~Emma