I Want You Back.

by Natalie   Jun 16, 2006


What happened to us that went so terribly wrong?
I remember the days that we used to be strong.
No one and nothing could ever get in our way,
And I'm confused about why we broke up today.

I want you back, I need to have you here with me,
I'm not going to be a part of your memory.
I want you back, Cause I just can't stand losing you,
So tell me exactly what you want me to do.

There's so many thoughts of you inside my mind,
And I know that I should just leave them all behind.
It's easier said than done, I know 'cause I've tried,
Though I will be strong, You won't see the tears I've cried.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

{Done for contest}
{If you think it's less than 5, Please try and leave a comment explaining why, so I can improve it. Thanks.}

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kersten

    If i could i would rate it higher then a five but i cant so ill just tell you..... Its perfact you wrote exactly how i feel about me and new ex we just broke up 3 days ago and i miss him and cant stand to see him b/c when i see him with her i just want to die i miss him so much n.e way you did great.....

    Kersten

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    Well i think it is a five..I have had that same feeling with my ex, it hurts a lot but you can always manage to write good things about it!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristina

    I can relate to this! i am going through this right now. amazing job writing it. thank you for writing. it made me think a lot more about it. keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I love this one...it reminds me of someone that I lost :( But it is wonderfully written...

  • 18 years ago

    by sophie

    Wow i relle lyk dat poem iss gr8!!well dun!!-x-x-

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