I love this poem! Awesome work! It's definately awesome in my eyes because that's exactly how i feel right now. 5/5

jamie

Another beautiful piece of work
for a contest?? Alryt then good luck hun! don't worry its so amazing and fascinating =)
Great job indeed
Wish you the best
NemO x0x0x0x

That was great! I can relate a lot. It was very easy to understand, and flowed nicely. Love it!

'ello Nat,

this is a good poem. venting, i take it?
*hugs*

i can relate to thissss. a lot. i know exactly how you feel.
you can make it without her. you'll be ok. i beliiiiiieve, in youuu. =P

E>

An emotional and quite powerful piece to say it is of this subject. You have the same issue in here as your other poems with the capital letters. On the second line of the second stanza it should be "I'm not going to be a part of your memory."
A touching write with a powerful ending too. Keep writing,

I seem to be able to relate to a lot of your poems, and this one is no exception. I had a boy that meant the whole world to me, and he left me. I needed him to keep breathing and thinking and being and living, but he left me alone during the darkest time of my life. I would have done anything to get him back, and now I know he just wasn't strong enough to stay. I again really liked this poem. I like your style and writer's voice. Nice job.

-Tainted

Aww..another emtoional poem.. hehe.. i just feel that i like the ones that are actually about how you feel better.. those really make me not be able to tear my eyes away and can make me cry sometimes.. the ones that you do for the contests sometimes loose a little of that spark.. but that might be jsut me.. good job though! 4/5

Wow.. now here's something i cant say anything about.. just beautiful (im starting to wonder whether i only like the sad poems, coz that wud be reli sad) i just love it.. tho its kinda nostalgic and sad (almost made me cry) its very heartfelt and ur diction and rhyme were great.. nice flow, very smooth.. i like how u keep ur poems short, but get to say it all.. wish i cud do that..

i dunno wat more to say, this is just amazing..
beautifully done

take good care
NannO

Very nicely written, simple and straight to the point. good job

That was a very good. Sounds like you went with how you were feelings, and I can relate to what you wrote so well.

**Keep up the good work**

Great way to let out your feelings and i can see that you've done that here, greatly written and to the point

Sondos

Gr8 poem... very good rythme. it seems that u NEED her, but it seems that there is mor. very well writen:)

I think that poem was awsome. It kinda reminded me of me and my relationship with my ex. I like it alot! Good Job!

Beautifully Written 5/5

Kay

I gave you 4 only because I think it could go on a little longer! Give more details! How is it that you feel! I mean we get that you love him, but what do you feel like now that you are broken up! more more more! Everyone wants more!

I know how that goes. i loved my boyfriend, even when he borke up with me for my best friend.....Rissa

Great poem, can totaly relate to it keep up the good work!
*!Courtney!*

Wow i relle lyk dat poem iss gr8!!well dun!!-x-x-

I love this one...it reminds me of someone that I lost :( But it is wonderfully written...

I can relate to this! i am going through this right now. amazing job writing it. thank you for writing. it made me think a lot more about it. keep it up 5/5