Thats vey beautiful,makes me feel like crying

Good job its kind of deep but great i give u a 5/5 i get wat ur trying to say and u got ur own style of writing ^.^

"in my tears you are born"

so beautifully put x

That made me think of Odyseus's voyage; he ended up alone but for the end, when he was at the mercy of his wife's fidelity.

The language and the verse was indeed, as so many said before me, beautiful. You certaintly have command over your words.

This is beautifully written. the way the emotion was expressed is so amazing. a sad but compelling poem. great job! =]

Its realy good so much feeling

Wow i really like this..
AMAZING