Bill.. I like this style you have been writing in. It's fantastic! I can't say anything more precise that Diana, so I shall simply say; This is a masterpiece, written straight from that weary soul of yours. It's always a pleasure to read your work!

MR.BILL

well, well, well....look who it is...long time no speak hey. I think the time i've spent away i can say i have missed your writing a lot. I really loved this poem, and the thing i love the best about your poetry is its real...your words are written with such passion, poise, and emotion. This poem was something i can appreciate and read over and over again....you did a breath taking job. I hope you are well, and look forward to reading the next poem and so on.

lots of love
take care
miss.scooby

Wow that was so descrpitive but next tiem try to keep it on the short side 5/5 nice poem maybe u can read one of mine

Great Job Bill!
You did a fantastic job with the imagery in this poem...I felt like I was there. And I feel that this should be stated, but I do not usually read poems that do not have the ABAB or ABCB ryhme scheme...but your poem kept my attention.It was very well written and flowed smoothly. Once again, congradualtions on a job well done.

Tristan

Very nice and beautiful