Very nice. It was easy to relate to, especially because that happens to alot of people I think. Good job. :)

You never told me you could write!!!
i can learn from you!! yay!!
really good job charmim!! :P
(did i seriously make that name up for you??)

love ya like a brother!!
Ronnie

Great poem man, I to can relate all to well to this one. It's funny how we always seem to have that strange streak of bad luck huh? Lol well thanks a lot for the comment and advice dude.