Awesome

Excellent!!! I love how the poem is constructed!

I liked this. The way you added on a little bit more to every last line of each stanza was really good.
You also used some very good wording which added to the effect of the poem and the flow.
Overall, this is a very good starting poem for your account
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

THAT'S A GOOD POEM!!

OH AND YOU HAD THE QUOTE ...
Rate this 5, if you ever told your friend that you liked someone, and then they "suddenly" started liking him tooo.

WELL iF YOUR GOiNG THROUGH THiS RiGHT NOW DON'T FEEL BAD i'M GOiNG THROUGH THE EXACT SAME THiNG RiGHT AT THiS VERY MOMENT!!!!!!!

This is a really good poem! Keep up the good work, and thanks bunches for the comment on my poem!

Hey! Thanks for the comment on my poem. This was so good. I think a lot of teenage girls feel this way. 5/5!

I cant even descrbe how much i LOVE this poem. you have an amazing talent! i can relate to this one too. thanks for commenting some of mine i really appreciate it! 5/5

Ok i will tell you when its done but its gonna take some time lol

Love the poem...u go girl lol

Ok, i can relate to all of ur poems pretty much.. especially this one a year ago. i think all teenage girls feel this way when they think they lost their love of their life.. i kno i did!!

Omg how do you think of these
they are so beautiful
i love them
:'(
soso pretty
-liz-
=]

Hi sara wuts up.....could u comment my new poem called I love you with all my heart..ok well thnax....u know ill return the favor lol

As someone said before, nice poem structure...

It looks like you were quite hurt; you have many poems about this subject...as I said in a previous comment, I wish happier times for you.

Okay so guys....this was like the first poem that I have ever written...i wrote it in 8th grade...and i was going through my stuff, and i thought it was good, so i submitted it...just thought i would give all the readers some background info haha....so i hope you enjoyed this! and thanks bunches for the comments

I say Don't worry Ill be fine

that is so true! i think that atleast once in a girls life they say that! and i love how the last line in ech stanza says the same thing but adds a little bit!!! this is a great poem..BEAUTIFUL AND TRUE!!!!

i love your poems they are so awesome!!!

XOXO becca

Thanks guys for commenting and rating my poems!! love ya <3