Her Bleeding Heart

by Lauren   Jun 16, 2006


He didn't know what he was getting himself into.
He hadn't a clue that this girl was so depressingly blue.
But as he slowly learned more about her beautiful soul,
he took her broken heart and made it whole.

And it's a good thing he came,
because she was just about to quit this game.
The game some may call love,
that's represented by the famous dove.
If he never made her feel,
the love she thought was no longer real.
She would've stopped believing,
and her heart would continue bleeding.

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  • 17 years ago

    by StormyStar

    AW! this is just so great! 5/5 keep up the good work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    That was an amazing poem... it had so much meaning behind it.. i gave you a 5/5... it was well written and it had a beautiful flow... keep it up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    Hey you, lol i need help! I want to write a poem right now...but i don't have a topic lol soooo...if you'd help me i'd be very happy!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    Dude...its past friday and i havent heard from you!!!!! lol but by the way...this poem is amazing/depressing at the same time! you are the best at writing these lol 5/5!!! and comment me!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    I like it a lot...it seems like im not the only one with drama going on...that sux!! lol i think im gonna write some more poems later too so you should read them! lol ttyl 5/5 by the way

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