My Last Breath

by PygmyPuff   Jun 17, 2006


Forever crawling in a maze,
Lost in a haze.
Found with delay,
Threw me away.

Heads or tails; A flip of the coin.
Hope you will join.
Again I'm lost,
At every cost.

My love for you, it still goes on,
Our dissolved bond,
With my last breath,
Love you \'til death.

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For a contest as usual...This is my attempt at Minute Poetry...

The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict
iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables.
The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''With my last breath
    Love you til Death''

    I LOVED this part.
    I thought that this poem was very good, I enjoyed it alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Milla

    Loving the meaning of the poem
    You have unquie stlyes of writing your poems.i think its cool that you do the contest but i think if you did a free verse poem your poetry would be alot better since you can say more with out limits but other then that you r a great writer keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Dre4meR

    Indeed it's good...simple yet very meaningful

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    You are a very accomplished poet. I think it is good the way you challenge yourself in these contests.

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