Chinese Paradise (several Haikus)

So very well done, every one of them, and all of the together
great haikus indeed
keep that kind of writing up:)

These are some really awesome haikus. I've always loved haikus and I think it's great that you do them so well, but then again, you do all poetry well.

you work never ceases to amaze me.

Rave!

"A true chinese paradise"
this is the only line where I felt like you used a superfluous word to take up a syllable. Besides that, I thought the haiku all did what they were meant to, and created a great image of tranquility and beauty

I love these haikus, they were so wonderfully written. I loved the flow and the word choice and everything. You are, in my opinion, a very talented writer with bounds of potential ^_^ I may not comment on every poem but I certainly read them! Keep smiling, keep writing,
Kim