Comments : Chinese Paradise (several Haikus)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I love these haikus, they were so wonderfully written. I loved the flow and the word choice and everything. You are, in my opinion, a very talented writer with bounds of potential ^_^ I may not comment on every poem but I certainly read them! Keep smiling, keep writing,
    Kim

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "A true chinese paradise"
    this is the only line where I felt like you used a superfluous word to take up a syllable. Besides that, I thought the haiku all did what they were meant to, and created a great image of tranquility and beauty

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    These are some really awesome haikus. I've always loved haikus and I think it's great that you do them so well, but then again, you do all poetry well.

    you work never ceases to amaze me.

    Rave!

  • 18 years ago

    by Oceansoul

    So very well done, every one of them, and all of the together
    great haikus indeed
    keep that kind of writing up:)