Sugar

by ~Black*Rose~   Jun 17, 2006


You've left me now,
You're no longer here,
Out of my life,
Away from this world,
You're in a better place,
You no longer feel pain,
But selfish me,
I want you back,
To hold you once more,
Before you go cold,
Let me have just one last hug.

[ This was written 6/14/06 really early about 3 am becasue my Guinea pig i had had for 3 years died, and I never got to say good-bye, then later that day my 2 one died, but this was written before that]

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    Awww..so sad.... :( eventhough the poem is kinda short,, i think it is full of emotions!! you expressed your feelings very well enough to imagine easily..Well done!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    How sweet, it's how we all feel that that time

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awww!! This is sad. My pet mouse died the other week, And I got so upset over it. Mainly cause I had him in my hands as he was dying. I felt terrible cause there was nothing I could do for him to stay alive.. He was trying to grasp for air and stuff but couldnt.. I cried about it for ages. But anyways, back to the poem.. I liked it, alot. Cause it did remind me of my pet. Keep it up!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    That really is sad... emotional again... you always put so much emotion into your poems... really good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Short but really sad, could feel the emotion coming out of it, very sad but good

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