by Natalie
Short but sad. And, I think this word 'You'r' was meant to be 'You're' =) |
by Darien
"You'r in a better place," |
I see that we can learn much from our pets about ourselves. The poem describes well common feelings of any bereavement GREAT POEM |
Aww. My 10 yr old fish just died today so im kinda feeling it lol. Short and sweet poem. |
by Tara Kay
That was really sad, it's hard when you loose at pet, definately one you have had for a long time. I am sorry for your loss, i know you could never replace the guinea pigs because they are unique, just like us |
by Cantchangeme
Short but really sad, could feel the emotion coming out of it, very sad but good |
by Mousie
That really is sad... emotional again... you always put so much emotion into your poems... really good 5/5 |
by Natalie
Awww!! This is sad. My pet mouse died the other week, And I got so upset over it. Mainly cause I had him in my hands as he was dying. I felt terrible cause there was nothing I could do for him to stay alive.. He was trying to grasp for air and stuff but couldnt.. I cried about it for ages. But anyways, back to the poem.. I liked it, alot. Cause it did remind me of my pet. Keep it up!! 5/5 |
by LadyPearl
How sweet, it's how we all feel that that time |
by Ye Seul
Awww..so sad.... :( eventhough the poem is kinda short,, i think it is full of emotions!! you expressed your feelings very well enough to imagine easily..Well done!! 5/5 |