Comments : Sugar

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Short but sad. And, I think this word 'You'r' was meant to be 'You're' =)

    It was sad though, I couldn't imagine how I would feel if my pet mice died. I'd be so upset tehe. Very good poem though hun. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    "You'r in a better place,"
    [I think you meant you're.]

    Good stuff though. Awww it was so sad. I miss my pets too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I see that we can learn much from our pets about ourselves. The poem describes well common feelings of any bereavement GREAT POEM

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Aww. My 10 yr old fish just died today so im kinda feeling it lol. Short and sweet poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    That was really sad, it's hard when you loose at pet, definately one you have had for a long time. I am sorry for your loss, i know you could never replace the guinea pigs because they are unique, just like us

  • 18 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Short but really sad, could feel the emotion coming out of it, very sad but good

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    That really is sad... emotional again... you always put so much emotion into your poems... really good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Awww!! This is sad. My pet mouse died the other week, And I got so upset over it. Mainly cause I had him in my hands as he was dying. I felt terrible cause there was nothing I could do for him to stay alive.. He was trying to grasp for air and stuff but couldnt.. I cried about it for ages. But anyways, back to the poem.. I liked it, alot. Cause it did remind me of my pet. Keep it up!! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    How sweet, it's how we all feel that that time

  • 18 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    Awww..so sad.... :( eventhough the poem is kinda short,, i think it is full of emotions!! you expressed your feelings very well enough to imagine easily..Well done!! 5/5