This is a really powerful poem, full of strengh.
i love the final line,
i mean it comes as no real surprise , to say how you knew you'd wake tomorrow. (otherwise why'd you write, 'tried to die'...???)
But the way you have worded it, i can interprate it as, just another struggle. not a final thought, but something to which you will contiune to battle. till you have succeeded your mission.
Great poem

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Well....wasnt that just ruddy amazing.
doesnt get more powerful than that really. I know you dont like comments with no intellagnace but this is all i can say.
That got to me... thats fu**ing powerful,
you are so talented.
Please never stop writing.

Well....wasnt that just ruddy amazing.
doesnt get more powerful than that really. I know you dont like comments with no intellagnace but this is all i can say.
That got to me... thats fu**ing powerful,
you are so talented.
Please never stop writing.