by Lady Vengeance Jun 17, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Gentle pulsing of the heart |
Amazing, you have wonderful word choice and placement. How you use your words is great. they make an impact as soon as they reach the eyes! |
by Mousie
This really was a different poem, but I really enjoyed it. Unbelieveable use of vocabulary and language... great job definitely a 5/5 poem... |
Oh yeah i remeber this little b8i8t8c8h. |
by Rich
How beautiful and deep you write and express yourself. I am so impressed! It touches my heart to read your work. |
by Sarah Ann
Beautiful, beautiful poem. The words and imagery you painted in the picture was simply fantastic. It flowed so nicely because it was so unique. A masterpiece I must say. Keep up your wonderful work!!! 5/5 |