Hmmmmmm, It was a very good poem and if I went in a bias position about it then I would give a better comment. Forgive my lapse of thought.

Darkest Wishes,
Matt

Awww.. that is so sad.. i wouldn't put it in the love category.. maybe the sad one would be good... this was nice.. the flow worked well and your descriptions were great! i also loved all the emotion you poured into it.. it really shone through.. nice job! 5/5

The ants go marching two by twos
You make me march alone

^^ I loved those lines write there , great metaphor!!!

THis poem was written very well I liked every line every word, nothing seemed out of place! Your very gifted and I do look forward to reading more!
-Krissey

P.S could you read Some Kids Dont Play please?

Wow!! That is amazing! I loved it. My favorite lines were:
What is so sweet with some people,
Tastes bitter when with me
I loved those lines. But the whole poem was so good! I loved it! The title is really catchy and definitely original and you had some great word choice. 5/5** Great job!

Wow...i like it...it's...unique....it has so much emotion in it...it really was a terrific poem...5/5.
^.^

That was, unique. I really liked it. The imagery in it was profound. Keep up the good work.

Wow.. I loved it!! This was so unique. The flow and rhyming were good! This was very well written!

The ants go marching two by twos
You make me march alone

I absolutely loved those lines! Great job!

I really like this poem, and i do believe it's in the wrong catagory... I don't know where it belongs though. Nice work Miss. Lady!

Ravyn

Wrong category or not, doesnt matter..it was a great poem! You could really feel your emotions come out through your words!!! Great job keep it up! 5/5

I loved the lay out. it made the reader consintrate on the words more, giving deeper understanding.

a fantastic poem. i loved it. i loved the referance to the ants marching, and hell hath no fire. they both painted such clear pictures.

loved it. an amazing job

Ruby

Just like everyone else I loved these two lines the best:

"The ants go marching two by twos
You make me march alone"

5/5 on the poem-love it

Beautiful, beautiful poem. The words and imagery you painted in the picture was simply fantastic. It flowed so nicely because it was so unique. A masterpiece I must say. Keep up your wonderful work!!! 5/5

How beautiful and deep you write and express yourself. I am so impressed! It touches my heart to read your work.

Such strength!

Oh yeah i remeber this little b8i8t8c8h.
stupid poem wouldnt let me comment...
*glares*
anyway, very articulate and flow was unbelieveable.
~Emah

This really was a different poem, but I really enjoyed it. Unbelieveable use of vocabulary and language... great job definitely a 5/5 poem...

If you want to, I would love it if you could check out some of mine.

Undeniable
I Can't Be It
Sun and Rain

thanks!

Amazing, you have wonderful word choice and placement. How you use your words is great. they make an impact as soon as they reach the eyes!