by AGirlWorthFightingFor Jun 17, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I am haunted by my reflection |
by Jordan
Good one! The over all atmosphere you created was my favorite part. As I scanned through the poem a few times, I actually started to feel lost, without direction just as the narrator does. |
Pretty Good Poem, But The Rhyme Scheme is Inconsistant. Also, It's A Little Choppy And Doesn't Flow To Well. With A Little Work It Could Be Really Good. |